Ha, that was pretty cool! I especially had to laugh at the sentence "She could feel the first pull deep within her, yanking at her soul, and giving her a bit of a side cramp." It's very arson, murder and jaywalking (http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/ArsonMurderAndJaywalking). :)